The Review Corner

Ever wonder what other people think about your work?  So do I.  I decided to find out, asking folks to review one of my books.

Good, Bad or Indifferent – here are the reviews that were sent to me.

(Check back for more)

Zeke and Lily (Book One): Once Upon A Beginning 

Lily is a simple girl with a submissive nature. She longs for a guy to fulfill her dreams and help her heart overcome a troubled past. Zeke is a “Daddy” who longs to find a soul mate who craves a gentle soul and a caring touch.

Sample: Butterflies and BabyGirls of the World

Every saga has a beginning … even the ABDL ones.
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“Short but enticing. It opened with excitement and anticipation that every ABDL gets from time to time.  In the middle was a symphony of lyrical chat which made me laugh which is not an easy task. And the end left me wanting more.” babyjames77, 34, UK

“Wonderful story that draws you in deeper the farther you read. Didn’t want it to end. Can’t wait to read more of Zorro Daddy’s work.” ………..>>>>…………….    Kayla, 33


Zeke and Lily (Book Two): Overnight    

Zeke and Lily spend the night in his apartment. The result is an evening of events where their separate lives finally collide and they fall in love.

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“Ok. I’m hooked.  Love the story, you managed to get all the emotion in the right places with the sincerity that was meant to be.  The fantasy side came as a surprise which I liked. It lit up the story and gave an idea of how Lily’s mind works.” ………………………………………………………………………………..     babyjames77, 34, UK

“The innocence and charm of a Babygirl’s fantasy come to life. Zorro Daddy has taken the care to include the little details that mean so much. Truly enjoyable.” Kayla, 33


Rock-A-Bye BabyGirls: Short & Sweet Stories

A collection of scenarios and short stories about the fetish of infantilism. It’s not an educational read about infantilism, but rather a romantic fantasy about role playing.
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“This is a collection of stories about what it’s like when a guy and a girl live out the deepest desires of their spirits, and embrace the freedom of being Big and little. It is about what it means to be a daddy, and what it means to be a baby girl. Sweet and playful, while touching and soulful, Zorro Daddy’s stories will transport the reader to a safe place where dreams are realized every time.” littleoneloves, 29, Illinois

“The author seems to not just connect with the Adult Babygirl but to know her every thought and feeling as if he felt it AS she felt it. He captures the innocent joy of living your inner babygirl while not missing the fact that she is also all woman. So few understand the ABDL dynamic but he explains it very well and I look forward to reading more from this author.” …………………>>>>………………   Elsa, Florida

“Before reading Zorro Daddy’s words, I did not believe that anyone, Daddy or not, understood what was in my heart. Zorro Daddy not only understands, but puts his understanding into words that truly affect your heart and mind.” Kayla, 33


Rock-a-Bye BabyGirls: Thoughts and Other Journeys of the Mind 

Some role playing themes affect one in a physical way. Some affect emotions. Some go so deeply as to affect the heart, mind and soul.

One such theme is infantilism, aka The “Daddy’s Girl” fetish.
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“Touching words that make you believe the author is speaking directly to you. The topics within tend to make you stop and think about your own desires.”   Kayla, 33


10 Things To Do With Your BabyGirl On A Saturday Night

When this BabyGirl made her Daddy a list of fantasies she would like to experience, she had no idea he would ever plan out the night ahead of her.

If all goes according to plan, she’ll be reduced, ravaged and spent of everything she knows herself to be. And she can’t wait, but she knows she’ll have to … if only until he allows her to grace her fantasies with what is to come.

Sample: “The List of Ten”


“This book details the erotically and emotionally charged on goings of the kinky fun that a Daddy and his baby girl get up to on a Saturday night. And boy, are they fun! This is an extremely well written tale that details the fantasy fulfillment of a baby girl who wants to experience public diaper play, bdsm, humiliation but needs a little push, loving care and support from her Daddy to experience them. The story depicts the delicate dynamic of love, submission and care taking within the Daddy/baby girl relationship and ultimately this is what sets it apart from the general throng of AB/DL erotic fiction. “10 Things To Do With Your BabyGirl On a Saturday Night” has heart, sexually charged scenes of humiliation that make you want to blush and offers a fresh perspective of the intimacy of completely submitting to your Daddy.” ………………………… Barbarellastar, 23, Ontario


The Mia Series


“I’ve read a few of Daddy Zorro’s stories, both from Amazon and elsewhere. I really like his writing style and use of language. There is a very sweet tenderness between the men and women in his pieces. If you want sweet age play, this is a great story. Personally, I prefer a bit more forced regression stories, but I would definitely recommend Daddy Zorro’s stories though.” ……..>>>>…. JenniferD12769

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“This is one of those books you feel like you have waited on for years. Adult fiction, and particularly special-interest erotica, is replete with stories playing well into the poles on either side of masculine/feminine energy divide, but Zorro has found a way to bridge the gap in the Mia Series. This book is simultaneously tender and tough, heart and hardened, yielding and staid. In the characters of Mia and her Daddy, Zorro has managed to capture both the deep emotional and healing elements of ageplay as well as its inextinguishable erotic power, and in doing so has proven that the forces of masculinity and femininity are far from discrete for the in-touch author of erotica.” ……………………………..   ResonantYes (FL), 31, M, Ohio


Johnny and the Princess

This is a story about growing beyond the let-downs which drop you to your knees, re-examining the value you have as a person and standing to your feet again, stronger than you ever were before.

Johnny and the Princess is an adult romance with each chapter told from his perspective and her perspective. The fetish themes of age play and ABDL are in its context.

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Forgotten Dreams – His Recollections
Forgotten Dreams – Her Recollections

Great story. The fact that is told from the little girl perspective and Daddy perspective makes this a very unique and original read. It was well written and made me feel like I was right there with them. I could definitely relate to the Princess’s feelings. Reading about this special and deep connection these
two characters had was very powerful and moving. I love it. This is definitely something I would recommend others read.  ……………………………..
DandelionWishes, 22, Michigan


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